I’d rather live in a large city. Because there is more places and stores to go to. Also, I’d rather live in a large city because there are more people and when there are more people, you can get more people to be friends with, which would tie in with jobs, people help you get jobs, and there are so many job opportunities in this big city. Plus, there are bigger houses to live in, and the houses are so big because people have money from their high paying jobs.
Destiny,
You have a topic sentence, simple reasons and examples
Could you:
-re-write your topic sentence
-write a closing sentence
I look forward to seeing your work again!